shapinglight: (Afterlife)
None ([personal profile] shapinglight) wrote in [community profile] sb_fag_ends2011-07-24 01:02 pm

Afterdeath

Surpised myself yesterday by managing to write a Spuffy drabble. I really thought my Spuffy muse was dead and buried.

Setting: Season 6, just post-Afterlife
Rating: PG
100 words. Spike is angry.
For the prompt: Knocking on Heaven's Door (though only the Bob Dylan version, 'cos I hate Guns n' Roses, and it doesn't have much to do with the song anyway)
Also, I couldn't think of a title. Shows, doesn't it?

Afterdeath



As she walks into the unforgiving sunlight, he can almost see those clouds of glory that she's trailing.

'Course she was in heaven. Stands to reason. No need to harrow hell, though he would have been first in line if anyone had asked.

Would have been up for knocking on heaven's door too. Battering it down, more like, and stamping on the pieces. Would have spat in God's eye if that's what it took.

Anything to get her back.

Which makes him as selfish as the rest of them – her so-called friends. But he's a vampire. What the bloody hell is their excuse?

[identity profile] sueworld2003.livejournal.com 2011-07-24 12:18 pm (UTC)(link)
"What the bloody hell is their excuse?"

Oh wonderful! So much for the bloody 'he's selfish argument some folks love to trot out online. *g*
quinara: Spike and Buffy approaching 'their' tree in AYW. (Spuffy tree)

[personal profile] quinara 2011-07-24 12:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, excellent! I like it. :D And see - there's still plenty of fic inside you!

[identity profile] shakensilence.livejournal.com 2011-07-24 01:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Very well done... I liked it a lot!!!

[identity profile] slaymesoftly.livejournal.com 2011-07-24 01:54 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this community! (oh wait, I've said a gazillion times already, haven't I?) Okay, I love this! The last line is perfect.

[identity profile] louise39.livejournal.com 2011-07-24 07:29 pm (UTC)(link)
That last thought is perfect!

[identity profile] anviloverheaven.livejournal.com 2011-07-25 06:36 am (UTC)(link)
Just brilliant!
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[identity profile] moscow-watcher.livejournal.com 2011-07-25 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent use of the prompt.

[identity profile] brutti-ma-buoni.livejournal.com 2011-07-25 08:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, great stuff. I love the harrowing of hell as a phrase, so glad you got to use it!

[identity profile] relurker.livejournal.com 2011-07-26 05:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely, and a very good point!

[identity profile] tennyo-elf.livejournal.com 2011-08-04 08:04 am (UTC)(link)
I like this, I like how you protrayed Spike, which I think is spot on here.

The last line was perfect! :)

[identity profile] singedbylife.livejournal.com 2013-01-26 08:25 pm (UTC)(link)
bloody brilliant